Dear students,
Hi and welcome back to class.
As I browsed your blog and read and commented on them, I noticed some common pattern of answer, 1) where you have the tendency to simplify your answer that sometimes I couldn’t find any relevancy to point discussed before it; 2) having so much unnecessary facts and details that making readers fell like reading a textbook.
Even though a blog entry should be short and simple, you don’t have to discount many of your words and make your argument everywhere. You don’t have to write an essay for that matter, but try to use concise word to articulate your point.
For those who love to back up their answer with all facts and data (as if we really want to know!), you too need to be concise and precise in choosing your words so that your entry doesn’t dazzled me … you know how much I hate to scroll the whole page just to find your main point at the end of your entry!
It is a waste when you come out with such a good point but having discussed it on the surface or lace it with unnecessary ‘ornament’ …
Try to be concise and precise and at the same time keep it short and simple.
On other words … briefly elaborate your point in detail – if you know what I mean.
Thank you and have a nice day!
Hi and welcome back to class.
As I browsed your blog and read and commented on them, I noticed some common pattern of answer, 1) where you have the tendency to simplify your answer that sometimes I couldn’t find any relevancy to point discussed before it; 2) having so much unnecessary facts and details that making readers fell like reading a textbook.
Even though a blog entry should be short and simple, you don’t have to discount many of your words and make your argument everywhere. You don’t have to write an essay for that matter, but try to use concise word to articulate your point.
For those who love to back up their answer with all facts and data (as if we really want to know!), you too need to be concise and precise in choosing your words so that your entry doesn’t dazzled me … you know how much I hate to scroll the whole page just to find your main point at the end of your entry!
It is a waste when you come out with such a good point but having discussed it on the surface or lace it with unnecessary ‘ornament’ …
Try to be concise and precise and at the same time keep it short and simple.
On other words … briefly elaborate your point in detail – if you know what I mean.
Thank you and have a nice day!
P/s: Please correct you time line as the clock doesn't show the correct time of posting.
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